City Bongo

Hi my name is Tizri. I am considering writing a book titled Luminia. Here is the basic plot, please tell me if you like it or what I can do to make it better!

A rather rebelious girl, Teresa “Tess” is on an “educational vacation” with her mother, Lora, and her brother, Scott, aprox. 2189. In the year 2089, a third wrold war had broken out over the creation of twelve androids. The androids were made by taking tweleve children , who had been selected at birth, at the age of eight and giving them total nerological surgery. Tess acadentally discovers one of the abbandoned stasis pods where one of the droids slept. Upon opening the pod, a girl at around the age of twelve is discovered. She identifies herself as ML-2997 familiar name Luminia. Luminia raises huge conterversy in the science community about wehter or not she is human. Along the way in the story, the find the other pods, Luminia falls in love with another droid. Scientists decide she is not human, kill her and disect her. Thxs